write a letter to your teacher explaining sudden decision to leave the curse and return to your home country. Express thank to your teacher, explain why you have to leave.
Dear Miss Rosy,
I am writing this letter with heavy heart to inform you that I have decided to leave this course. It is a sudden decision due to some unavoidable family issues I must return back to my home country.
Day before yesterday, my mother called and reviled that my father got paralyzed after a bouts of sickness. It is impossible for me to leave my mother alone to handle this situation. If I had gone there I would have taken prompt decisions related to hospitals and doctors. However, it is not yet late, I have decided to fly back and continue my studies at my home country so that I can take care of my family simultaneously.
Six months’ time had just flown away now I am realizing how much I learned from you effortlessly. I have thoroughly enjoyed your presentations and computer sessions. I would like to thank you for all your energy that you invested on me to outshine others. Your perseverance is unforgettable and I will always cherish these days as my best days of learning and experiencing.
Hopefully in two years I will have completed my studies and got job in top company. I Hope in future we will be in touch via emails.
Yours sincerely,
Aparajita
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...o some unavoidable family issues I must return back to my home country. Day before yest...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a bout' or simply 'bouts'?
Suggestion: a bout; bouts
...iled that my father got paralyzed after a bouts of sickness. It is impossible for me to...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 49, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...hs' time had just flown away now I am realizing how much I learned from you effortlessl...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65258215962 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81766030466 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638497652582 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.627944853 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2307692308 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3846153846 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.15384615385 4.34317383033 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20966038857 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784346881379 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644270181084 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113049732287 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796865130955 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.