Dear Sir/Madam,
As a businessman I am a frequent business class flyer and a admirer of your prominent ABC Airlines and I , the purpose of penning down this epistle is to draw your attention towards an problem I am facing.
On 3rd Jan this year, I was traveling from Bangalore to New Delhi in a morning flight which I boarded around 3 am and reached Delhi 5.30am, with seat number A-5 window side. During my journey I was reading My Mother's medical reports and for sure I forgot them in the magazine panel of the seat. When I was in cab back for home I realize that I did not collected them. Coming week, my mother have an appointment in Redmond, USA and I am indulge in all the visa process and others as her condition is not good.
Could you please do me a favor by gathering knowledge about those lost reports and if you could deliver them on my mentioned address, I am ready to bear charges for delivery services.
I will really appreciate your prompt assistance.
Your Thankfully
Abc
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... am a frequent business class flyer and a admirer of your prominent ABC Airlines ...
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Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rer of your prominent ABC Airlines and I , the purpose of penning down this epistl...
^^
Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...istle is to draw your attention towards an problem I am facing. On 3rd Jan this...
^^
Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'collect'
Suggestion: collect
... back for home I realize that I did not collected them. Coming week, my mother have an ap...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 437, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'indulged'.
Suggestion: indulged
...an appointment in Redmond, USA and I am indulge in all the visa process and others as h...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52197802198 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55537963191 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681318681319 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.5507325279 44.8134815571 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.875 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 4.34317383033 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157129449758 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662066495236 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461176653388 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886473206364 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272095603068 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.