It is being observed that inhabitants of villages, nowadays prefer to shop in the metros supermarkets. Therefore, a decline in local shops selling and further adverse effects are roaring high recently. In this essay, the fundamental advantages or disadvantages will be discussed.
To embark with, firstly, supermarkets attract their customers with a vivid range of similar items like food, clothing, latest brands, and many more under one roof, people from rural parts of country initially finds it quite fascinating and now got habitual. Moreover, secondly, shopping centers in cities provide several offers and discount schemes, which is the best way to increase buyers. In a recent piece of article from "The Times", around fifty-two percent of the rural population admirers the good services provided by supermarkets. Certainly, lastly, this attitude of devotion towards users, make them feel good and gain their trust also.
On the other hand, mostly shop business in villages is run by locals or farmers during offseasons, to earn for livelihood. Hence, they have limited household items without international brands, in addition, supply in local areas is difficult and expensive. Furthermore, a certain set of people in rural areas create hand-crafts to sell but due to lack of publicity, they seem lucid under the shining glamour of fancy metro markets and eventually get closed. Situations like this create a circumstance of unemployment is villages. In an empirical survey conducted by London's "Oxford University", which ascertained that around sixty percent of villagers buy expensive products from city shopping centers just to mimic like urban residents. Consequently, this practice effects the economic balance in suburban areas, ultimately the local development also ceases.
To conclude, although, local businesses have caliber and quality, yet, the variety of products under single roof and services attract the rural residents. Resulting though, the advancement of metro shopping centers making a local shop to run out of business. This is a divastating situation for rural development and it overwigh disadvantages then advantages of it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the latest'.
Suggestion: , the latest
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Line 3, column 653, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ake them feel good and gain their trust also. On the other hand, mostly shop busi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6443768997 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00982153834 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644376899696 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8245358734 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0625 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231059283754 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752287712698 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589299203501 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149701910403 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062147503642 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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