Writing task 1 (a letter)
You recently met a couple who will be visiting your town. Write a letter to them and say
– Suggest what to bring
– Recommend where they should stay
– What places they should visit
Dear Eman and Mohamed,
I hope you are doing well. I am excited for our meeting here in Kuwait at the end of the month.
When packing your lounges, you will only need light clothes. Although its the winter, the weather here is quite warm, not like the freezing at your place. Another thing I think it will be benefit is to bring your professional camera, it can help you a great deal because there are various views which you may like to take pictures for.
About the astonishing views, I have already prepared a list for places we can visit together. Firstly, we can visit the Avenues mall, not only for it's great shopping festival, which is going to be held at the time of your visit, but also for the numerous restaurants with all kind of food that you may wish to try. Secondly, as the weather currently warm but not hot, we can go on a picnic at Alshaheed park, where you will definitely enjoy the nature and the architecture of that stunning garden. Finally, we can set by the Gulf beach next to Kuwait-towers and also you can capture those moments with the tower's view, that if you wish to snap the main country's symbol.
you are welcome, and please feel free to ask me if you have any inquiries.
Yours sincerely,
Sara Eltantawy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Eman and Mohamed, I hope you are doing well. I am excited ...
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Line 9, column 71, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... will only need light clothes. Although its the winter, the weather here is quite w...
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Line 13, column 671, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... wish to snap the main countrys symbol. you are welcome, and please feel free to...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...o snap the main countrys symbol. you are welcome, and please feel free to as...
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Line 17, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ee to ask me if you have any inquiries. Yours sincerely, Sara Eltantawy
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Line 21, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e any inquiries. Yours sincerely, Sara Eltantawy
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, another thing, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54824561404 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32348535174 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.9080054177 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2727272727 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 4.34317383033 218% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138787522736 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548687276542 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029507813826 0.0603063233224 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0596356035581 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478807823561 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.