You want to sell your bicycle. Your friend has told you that his cousin might like to buy it from you.
Write a letter to your friend’s cousin. In your letter
explain why you are selling the bicycle
describe the bicycle and how much it will cost
suggest a date when your friend’s cousin can come and see the bicycle.
Dear Ali,
I hope you're doing well.
As Ahmed, my cousin, told me about you, you're interested in buying my bicycle. Firstly , I want you to know the reason why why I'm selling it is that I'm moving abroad next month and there are things that I can't take with me because of their size. my bike is one of those things, so I'm seeing if any of my known people are welling to buy it off with cheap price.
As Ahmed told you, its a red colored, 2018 eddition of a Wheel's brand, with two spare tires. I've been driving it for about a year now but not with heavy-duty. if you're welling to have it, as I told Ahmed, I will give you all it's accessories and a full bottle of break's oil.
As I said, I'm leaving next month so if you want to have a look at it, it would be best to come on 14th or 15th. that can give me time to find another buyer if you decide not to take it.
Ok, I look forward to your response, let me know if you can't make it.
All the best,
Sara
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: you're
Dear Ali, I hope youre doing well. As Ahmed, my cousin, t...
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...As Ahmed, my cousin, told me about you, youre interested in buying my bicycle. Firstl...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...interested in buying my bicycle. Firstly , I want you to know the reason why why I...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
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...Firstly , I want you to know the reason why why Im selling it is that Im moving abroad ...
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..., I want you to know the reason why why Im selling it is that Im moving abroad nex...
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...he reason why why Im selling it is that Im moving abroad next month and there are ...
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Line 9, column 206, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... next month and there are things that I cant take with me because of their size. my ...
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...ant take with me because of their size. my bike is one of those things, so Im seei...
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...ize. my bike is one of those things, so Im seeing if any of my known people are we...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...th cheap price. As Ahmed told you, its a red colored, 2018 eddition of a Wheel...
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...f a Wheels brand, with two spare tires. Ive been driving it for about a year now bu...
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...out a year now but not with heavy-duty. if youre welling to have it, as I told Ahm...
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... a year now but not with heavy-duty. if youre welling to have it, as I told Ahmed, I ...
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...l bottle of breaks oil. As I said, Im leaving next month so if you want to ha...
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... would be best to come on 14th or 15th. that can give me time to find another buyer ...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...rd to your response, let me know if you cant make it. All the best, Sara
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.00507614213 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.91059344431 2.54303337028 75% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61421319797 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3224682171 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7272727273 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281045210949 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10700230608 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852415384461 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161091263427 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340737555433 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.06 70.7449484536 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.68 8.71597938144 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.84 7.59969072165 77% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 41.2886597938 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.