Writing task 1
You recently read an article in a newspaper about your childhood friend with whom you have lost contact for a long time. Write a letter to the editor. In your letter:
• Say which edition and when did the article appear
• Explain why you lost contact with your friend
• Say how you want them to help you to get back in touch
Dear sir or madam,
I, Neelam Macwan, am writing this letter for asking a help in a personal matter. I have read an article about a social worker named Mary Smith in the extra addition of your newspaper 'New York Times' dated 05/03/2019. Mary is my childhood friend with whom I had lost contact several years ago.
Mary and I were living in the same neighborhood and we went to same school, we were really close friends and spent much time together after school hours. However, we had to depart after high school because of her family moved out of the town due to unemployment. We were in the touch by telephone for a while after that but gradually lost the contact as platforms like Facebook and WhatsApp were not available. This led to total disconnection between us.
So I would like to request if you can give Mary's contact number or address because she is not on Facebook. Moreover, please approach her and let her know that I am looking forward to meeting her. I am sure this is not a lot to ask. I am awaiting for your positive response.
Best regards,
Neelam Macwan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...Dear sir or madam, I, Neelam Macwan, am writing this letter for asking a help i...
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Line 7, column 27, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...etween us. So I would like to request if you can give Marys contact number or ...
^^
Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: AWAITING_FOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: awaiting; waiting for
... am sure this is not a lot to ask. I am awaiting for your positive response. Best regards...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...esponse. Best regards, Neelam Macwan
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55102040816 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43747296784 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673469387755 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4155206132 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3333333333 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199964034211 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612464918383 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665998607988 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142907188845 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122100504276 0.0580467560999 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.