You recently read an article in a newspaper about your childhood friend with whom you have lost contact for a long time. Write a letter to the editor. In your letter:•Say which edition and when did the article appear•Explain why you lost contact with

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You recently read an article in a newspaper about your childhood friend with whom you have lost contact for a long time. Write a letter to the editor. In your letter:

• Say which edition and when did the article appear

• Explain why you lost contact with your friend

• Say how you want them to help you to get back in touch

Hi Matt

I am so happy to receive your letter and I want to discuss with you how to solve this situation together. I realise that you are better than me in english so you maybe felt bother when we practising but i almost can not deny that my english is being better after training time so i wish we can continue . thanks !

you are my best friend you so nice,Hi Matt

I am so happy to receive your letter and I want to discuss with you how to solve this situation together. I realise that you are better than me in english so you maybe felt bother when we practising but i almost can not deny that my english is being better after training time so i wish we can continue . thanks !

you are my best friend you so nice

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... is being better after training time so i wish we can continue . thanks ! you a...
^
Line 3, column 303, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... training time so i wish we can continue . thanks ! you are my best friend you s...
^^
Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thanks
...aining time so i wish we can continue . thanks ! you are my best friend you so nice,...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
... so i wish we can continue . thanks ! you are my best friend you so nice,Hi Matt ...
^^^
Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Hi
...s ! you are my best friend you so nice,Hi Matt I am so happy to receive your le...
^^^
Line 7, column 281, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... is being better after training time so i wish we can continue . thanks ! you a...
^
Line 7, column 303, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... training time so i wish we can continue . thanks ! you are my best friend you s...
^^
Line 7, column 306, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thanks
...aining time so i wish we can continue . thanks ! you are my best friend you so nice ...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
... so i wish we can continue . thanks ! you are my best friend you so nice
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 584.0 937.175257732 62% => OK
No of words: 141.0 206.0 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.14184397163 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15944679576 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 54.0 127.690721649 42% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.382978723404 0.622605031667 62% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 181.8 290.88556701 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.898531933 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.8 76.5299724578 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 16.8248392259 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205902674171 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156292841606 0.0766984524023 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555815760724 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177325377286 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0107707455379 0.0580467560999 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.03 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.15 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 10.0 41.2886597938 24% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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