Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with regards to the job which I'd have taken this summer. Due to some reasons, it wouldn't be possible for me to still occupy that spot this year.
My school just called off their ongoing strike that has lasted for about 8 months. The students are required to start classes from next week Monday, since the first semester exams starts in three weeks. We'd be occupied throughout this year so we can be able to cover everything that was missed in the last academic session.
Please I'm really very sorry for the inconvenience this might have caused your office. When I heard the news about resuming my academics, complying was the best choice. I never saw this coming! I plead with you to accept my apology.
Lastly, I'd want to bring to your notice that I'm still interested to work in your establishment. If I am giving this same opportunity next summer, then I would gladly fill in that position to work as your sales manager.
I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
Adam Grant
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter with regards to...
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Suggestion: I'd
...is letter with regards to the job which Id have taken this summer. Due to some rea...
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Suggestion: wouldn't
...en this summer. Due to some reasons, it wouldnt be possible for me to still occupy that...
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Suggestion: I'm
...n the last academic session. Please Im really very sorry for the inconvenience...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...h you to accept my apology. Lastly, Id want to bring to your notice that Im st...
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Message: The proper name in singular (Id) must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...ou to accept my apology. Lastly, Id want to bring to your notice that Im still i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, look, really, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72192513369 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38584192682 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.695187165775 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6535123806 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.5833333333 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5833333333 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151534700937 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510902187254 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375326117474 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804196744738 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314321856299 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.