? You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.
Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter :
?give details of your visit to the restaurant
?explain the reason for the celebration
?say what was good about the food and service
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing this letter with regards to the wonderful night, which my friends and I had at your restaurant.
So that the restaurant had a cozy and comfortable space, we were very pleased spending time at. Since it was decorated with the modern art, my friends and I, who are interested in contemporary paints, enjoyed them.
Indeed, we gathered at your restaurant to celebrate my birthday that is a especial day for me.
However, being at your restaurant and spending time there was a wonderful occasion and wonderful experience that I never forget it. Your foods were delicious, and your service is great. In other words, the foods were well-cooked with the fresh ingredients that made them very well. Moreover, the staff were polite and on-time who served any thing right if we asked.
At the end, please accept my sincere thanks for the great event that you made for us.
Yours faithfully,
Kave Bahmani
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- You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion and you were very pleased with the food and service Write a letter to the restaurant manager In your letter give details of your visit to the restaurant explain the reason for 78
- You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion and you were very pleased with the food and service Write a letter to the restaurant manager In your letter give details of your visit to the restaurant explain the reason for 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 73, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...aurant to celebrate my birthday that is a especial day for me. However, being at...
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Line 5, column 337, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
...taff were polite and on-time who served any thing right if we asked. At the end, pleas...
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Line 5, column 366, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...who served any thing right if we asked. At the end, please accept my sincere tha...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, well, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8679245283 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56401757944 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647798742138 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5616305369 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364988074749 0.216113520407 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132989493424 0.0766984524023 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678926986226 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18506274178 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340026777575 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.