You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion and you were very pleased with the food and service Write a letter to the restaurant manager In your letter give details of your visit to the restaurant explain the reason for

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You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.
Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter:
give details of your visit to the restaurant
explain the reason for the celebration
say what was good about the food and the service

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my deepest gratitude regarding my last visit to your restaurant.
Three days ago, On Sep 21th, I booked a 10-seat table located in the right corner side of the main hall exactly after the biggest window. I barely remember the table number but I think it was 12. Our book time was at 7pm to 10pm.
This ceremony was very important to me because it was my graduation party and my birthday party simultaneously. Recently, I have decided to Immigrate to another country, therefore, it was my last chance to have a reunion with my friends.
My wife and I ordered lamb steaks. They were as delicious as I expected and they were well-cooked and completely juicy. My friends ordered pizzas. Almost all of them were satisfied tith their dishes, except Ali who believed his food was not tasty enough. Services were fascinating too. Dishes were served hot, and waiters knew how to behave customers. In addition, drinks were brought by adequate ice cubes which were delightful for everyone.
Thank you again.
Your faithfully.
Shahriar Shirzadi

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, therefore, well, i think, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92349726776 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65819895395 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.72131147541 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1858876771 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.3571428571 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0714285714 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118284778331 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428732136162 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388090625277 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0551826443483 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382856463549 0.0580467560999 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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