? You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.
Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter :
?give details of your visit to the restaurant
?explain the reason for the celebration
?say what was good about the food and service
Dear Madame,
I am writing to express my appreciation with regard to the delicious food and excellent services you had offered at your intimate restaurant yesterday.
To begin with, arriving to the restaurant, we were welcomed warmly by the waiters. Moreover, they offered us a table at the balcony with spectacular scenery providing us not only a private environment, also a friendly atmosphere with playing the piano and lightening the beautiful candles.
The reason why we gathered together there is that I am going to immigrate to The UK forever tomorrow morning and I would like to have unforgettable and wonderful time with my friends for the last time.
Regarding the food and service, firstly, the variety of the foods you had offered at the menu was remarkable, since all of my friends, vegetarian or meat eater, had different choices to choose. Secondly, the quality and quantity of the dishes and the various beverages and wines offered was really satisfying. Finally, the staff was extremely polite and well-mannered.
Again, I really appreciate you and your staff the memorable night you made for us.
Yours faithfully,
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- You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion and you were very pleased with the food and service Write a letter to the restaurant manager In your letter give details of your visit to the restaurant explain the reason for 78
- You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion and you were very pleased with the food and service Write a letter to the restaurant manager In your letter give details of your visit to the restaurant explain the reason for 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...the various beverages and wines offered was really satisfying. Finally, the staff was extremely polit...
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Line 5, column 370, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...was extremely polite and well-mannered. Again, I really appreciate you and your ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, to begin with, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15675675676 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89588509351 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648648648649 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.4115178441 44.8134815571 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.25 76.5299724578 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.125 4.34317383033 348% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235825580165 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913936006788 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787519761108 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129715868572 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084127940444 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 8.37731958763 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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