You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very please with the food and service.
Write a letter to the restaurant manager, in your letter
give details of your visit to the restaurant.
explain the reason for celebration
say what was good about the food and the service.
I’m writing this letter, to thank for your fantastic service offered for our birthday pasted hosted at your restaurant on last Sunday, September 10th.
It has been long time our friends met each other, hence, we planned for a birthday party as wells to celebrate our 15 years of togetherness. Moreover, it is also an opportunity to have close interaction with all the family members. In addition, it is an avenue to exchange our personal milestone.
Nowadays, selecting optimum hotel is an extremely intricate process, but the information furnished on your website made the job easier. Furthermore, the hospitality was awesome, also the tables were arranged before we step into the hotel shows that you are a real professional. Additionally, the quality of food served were excellent with right mix of spices helped our stomach without any burning issues. Overall, it was a cherish moment to remember in our life.
I really appreciate the hostile experience, this will help you to sustain in the market way long ahead.
Yours sincerely,
Jade.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 422, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...out any burning issues. Overall, it was a cherish moment to remember in our life. I real...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, really, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17543859649 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81610371532 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.730994152047 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6179048007 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 4.34317383033 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18843182723 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620629033721 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559419006164 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994553679263 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617992506541 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.