You and your colleagues just came back from a foreign language training. Write a letter to the manager and say -explain how you and your colleagues enjoyed the trainingSuggest more training sessions in the futureSay when and where it should be conducted

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You and your colleagues just came back from a foreign language training. Write a letter to the manager and say

-explain how you and your colleagues enjoyed the training

Suggest more training sessions in the future

Say when and where it should be conducted

Dear Mr. Shah,

I am working as a Human Resource manager at your company. I am one of the employees to whom our company sent for French language training course to overseas. I am writing this letter to appreciate the course on behalf of all the attendee.

To begin with, I really would like to express my gratitude to the company for organising such language training programme. Everything was well organised in the course and especially course tutors were very excellent and professional in their teaching. As company organised this course in France, it also helped us in understanding the culture of France which has made our language learning much easier as you know that language and culture are inter-related. Now, we all feel more confident that we would be better able to communicate with our French clients.

I would like to suggest you that company can organise refresher course for its employees once in every quarter so that it can help us in becoming fluent in French language. However, training should be conducted in our office or online so that it cannot pile up the work.

Once again thanking you for organising this course.

Yours sincerely,

Gaurav Patel

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...h language training course to overseas. I am writing this letter to appreciate th...
^
Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er to appreciate the course on behalf of all the attendee. To begin with, I rea...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, really, so, well, you know, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96984924623 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6931298071 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613065326633 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2029113349 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9090909091 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141864870785 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058616290848 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027854875956 0.0603063233224 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829641218238 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161047229707 0.0580467560999 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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