Some parents believe that reading entertainment books is a waste of their time. In your opinion, children should only read serious, educational books. Do you agree or disagree?. Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own experience.
it is a irrefutable fact that reading an any kind of book is a good habit. Still there are some parents who believe that reading entertainment books is a complete waste of time. they feel that children should only read academic books. However, I disagree with this first given statement. In the following paragraphs, I shall put forth my arguments to support my view.
There are many reasons why I believe that reading entertainment books is not a waste of time. To initiate with, one of the major benefits is that as children enjoy reading entertainment books, they will gradually develop the habit of reading. this proves to be very helpful in their later life. In addition to this, by reading non-academic books, teenagers can widen their horizons and get a knowledge about different fields. In this highly competitive world, it is the need of the hour as recruiters are more interested in a candidate who have basic knowledge of various subjects.
On the contrary , some parents opine that children should not be allowed to read entertainment books as they will gain no benefit by reading them. they argue by saying that it is a complete non-productive activity. Another reason for opposing is that most of these entertainment books is a fictional. Hence, it makes difficult for children to identify the difference between reality and fiction. Sometimes, children also pick up the negative traits of character of the book they read. Due to above reasons, they feel that children should only read educational books.
To put in nutshell, I pen down saying that even though reading an entertainment book has certain drawbacks , I firmly believe that parents should allow their children to read non-academic books if we look at the plethora of benefits this trend has to offer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, look, so, still, as to, in addition, kind of, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80886493485 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543624161074 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.0307172081 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6470588235 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5294117647 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326838084271 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117493838659 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933826125528 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217433113735 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341410051239 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.