You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
-introduce yourself
-explain what is wrong with the furniture
-say what action you would like the landlord to take
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ................. ,
Dear Mr.smith,
I am one of the residents in your flat No.6 on riverside Street, and I rented this flat from you six months ago. according to our contract to settle on 27th October, my family an I took the keys from the agent on the due time, and I apologize that I have not had the chance to meet you.
I am writing with regard to something wrong with the furniture inside the flat. when we entered to the flat, we were face with some problems regarding the furniture which one of it's leg had been broken.In addition, the springs of another piece of furniture in the northern room was in poor condition the hurt my son's hand. However, the overall status of the flat is acceptable and satisfactory, and I know that we will have pleasurable time in that.
Consequently,I would like you to address these problems as soon as possible and repair these two pieces of furniture, or replace them with a new one.
I am looking forward to your action and solution.
Yours sincerely,
Paul George
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- You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter-introduce yourself-explain what is wrong with the furnit 73
- You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter-introduce yourself-explain what is wrong with the furnit 73
- You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter-introduce yourself-explain what is wrong with the furnit 73
- You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter-introduce yourself-explain what is wrong with the furnit 73
- You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter-introduce yourself-explain what is wrong with the furnit 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: According
...nted this flat from you six months ago. according to our contract to settle on 27th Octob...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'I'?
Suggestion: an; I
...ct to settle on 27th October, my family an I took the keys from the agent on the due...
^^^^
Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...ong with the furniture inside the flat. when we entered to the flat, we were face wi...
^^^^
Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'faced'.
Suggestion: faced
...t. when we entered to the flat, we were face with some problems regarding the furnit...
^^^^
Line 5, column 203, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...re which one of its leg had been broken.In addition, the springs of another piece ...
^^
Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...leasurable time in that. Consequently,I would like you to address these problem...
^^
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...action and solution. Yours sincerely, Paul George
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, look, regarding, so, in addition, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58333333333 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54137976523 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.3097970763 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.125 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 4.34317383033 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203136718494 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893053820808 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424528713948 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106828991882 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211555599351 0.0580467560999 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.