You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter•introduce yourself•explain what is wrong with the

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You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter
• introduce yourself
• explain what is wrong with the furniture
• say what action you would like the landlord to take
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear .................,

Dear Mr Lee,
I am Sanjana Mehta, staying as a tenant in your appartment on 62th central street. I have been staying here for the last 3 months with my family.
I have been noticing that there are some termites in the furniture. These termites have damaged the sofas and coffee table in the living room. There is some powder that has fallen off from them every day. I believe these termites will damage the other furniture in the house also if not dealt with in time.
I request you to kindly arrange for pest control services. There are a couple of government agencies in the neighbourbood which offer thrice in a year service contract. We can have it done on any weekend in the following month. If you so agree I shall reach out to you with the details and charges of some of them.
In anticipation of your favourable reply.
Yours sincerely,
Sanjana Mehta.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 713.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57051282051 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41647962277 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673076923077 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.6475102875 44.8134815571 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.4166666667 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198990119595 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678290503142 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537113418639 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107199510429 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023955490498 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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