You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter
introduce yourself
explain what is wrong with the furniture
say what action you would like the landlord to take
Dear Mr Anderson,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the furniture in your apartment that my family has been renting for over the last two years. Most furniture is in the satisfactory state, but the following items need either repairing or replacing.
To begin with, the model of the TV set is outdated. It seems to have been designed in the late nineties. When we tried to purchase the replacement for the old remote control, the sales assistant informed as that the manufacturer stopped producing this model of television in 1998. Therefore, we still use the old one, which is both falling apart and is working occasionally.
Another problem is related to the poor condition of the sofa. I think that it is the high time to substitute it with a fresh one, since there are numerous holes in the surface, which are constantly growing in both number and size. My wife has attempted to fix the damage, but it does not help, as the material appears irreparably worn out.
In conclusion, I would be grateful, if you do something about the TV set and sofa, because my family is experiencing discomfort while living in London, which is considered the modern city. I look forward to your reply with solution.
Your sincerely,
Tolegen
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, still, therefore, while, i think, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9023255814 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79237933828 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646511627907 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6109376732 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8333333333 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160660992712 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581588075231 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657327970714 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835281077329 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538282374289 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.