You and your family are moving to another country, and you are looking for rented accommodation there. write a letter to a property agent, in your letter
-introduce you and your family
-describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find.
-give your preference or the location of the accommodation.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in regards to a rented apartment.
I have been pursuing my career as a Manager in City Bank, here in New York. Currently, I am living in the downtown area along with my wife and two children. My spouse is a housewife and both children are attending their classes in a local institute.
Precisely, I am seeking a 2-bedroom flat with a shared bathroom. Apart from this, my requirement is that there must be a spacious kitchen. As in present accommodation, we are facing the problem of a garage, please try to find an apartment block having a parking area.
Since my job has been transferred to Fast York, Toronto, it is absolutely necessary for me to have an accommodation in this area. Also, could you please make sure, if that area is well connected to public transport. Please send me the apartment details along with the rent details so that I can ponder over your information.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Dheeraj Goyal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 26, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in regards to a rented apartment. I have been pu...
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Line 17, column 64, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessary'.
Suggestion: necessary
...ransferred to Fast York, Toronto, it is absolutely necessary for me to have an accommodation in this...
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Line 17, column 100, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
... is absolutely necessary for me to have an accommodation in this area. Also, could you please ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81920903955 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78871796275 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672316384181 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9070879089 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0833333333 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144445137934 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522760735193 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552222296964 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801791254011 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617185970756 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.