Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to request for booking arrangement at your hotel as I am planning to spend the next weekend along with my family in your hotel.
My wife and I include 10 years old son and 7 years old daughter are planning to stay at your hotel on 23rd and 24th Apr. 2019. Therefore, I would appreciate to make the necessary arrangement to book two connected rooms in high floor for two nights. In addition, we would like to have the rooms with balcony and sea view. Regarding the meals, my family is not interested to have full-board, but they may have half-board depends on the main courses that you will offer during the stay.
When I browsed your website and viewed the photos of the facilities, I did not see kid pool nor area where my children can enjoy. Could you please let me know what are the activities and area that suit my childrens needs?
I am also interested to arrange early check-in as I might arrive the hotel at 11 a.m. Hence, please confirm if this is possible and let me know the estimated cost of spending the weekend at your hotel?
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Smith Jay
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, regarding, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52093023256 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39012752228 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.7622023801 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317977383141 0.216113520407 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105899724539 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656675608207 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163483491391 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603592506053 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.