Dear Sam,
Hope you are doing fine. I am writing this letter to let you know that I have got a scholarship to study MBA in MCT university in Sydney and I am planning to travel next month. Therefore, I am seeking your advice on the living cost and the job availability during my stay.
I have recently awarded a scholarship from my company to study MBA in MCT university. So I will be traveling directly from Dubai on 27th Jul. 2010 to Sydney. The MBA program duration is 18 months focusing on the modern ICT technology infrastructure.
My company will sponsor the tuition fees only, but I will be responsible for other expenditures cost for food, accommodation and transportation. Therefore, I need your assistance to find a part-time job in any of IT Infrastructure companies. Furthermore, would it be possible to get an accommodation nearby the university so I can avoid using the public transportation?
My updated resume has been sent to your email as I know you have a wide social network in Sydney who might be interested in my skills.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Regards,
John Las
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, look, so, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82051282051 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13293463408 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625641025641 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8096566093 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3076923077 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2216119903 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685418909308 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615210921572 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119793301445 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073096251831 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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