You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment in your letter.• Describe the problem with the equipment• Explain how this problem is affecting

Dear sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to complain about an issue encountered in a printer I have recently bought from your store located in DAS City Center.

Two months ago, I bought HP printer DL308999L with the serial number: HPL301T03 with one year warranty. Since two days I have been facing issue in the scanning job. While I am trying to scan the documents , it sends a failure message that document scan was failed. I have tried my best to fix this issue by troubleshooting the methods suggested in your website, unfortunately, it was unsuccessful. Furthermore, I have tried calling your call center, but without any positive outcomes.

As I am heavily using the scanner on daily basis scanning my agent's rent contracts and sending it to our customers, it has massive impact on may daily works and might impact our customers' expectations.

Hence, I would request you to replace the printer as soon as possible to avoid further delay in my work progress.

I am looking forward hearing your positive response.

Yours faithfully,

SAM Andrew

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...mber: HPL301T03 with one year warranty. Since two days I have been facing issue in th...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 205, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... While I am trying to scan the documents , it sends a failure message that documen...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, look, may, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06779661017 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82791935668 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.677966101695 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9457863355 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150227072819 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580126282917 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0263833449936 0.0603063233224 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0702779638992 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303095990706 0.0580467560999 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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