You and your family went to a restaurant one night. The next day the family left sick with food poisoning. Complain to the Manager about the whole issues
Dear Sir,
I am writing to bring to your notice about food hygiene issues in your restaurant during last week visit with my family at your restaurant. I am a regular client at your restaurant from last two years and regularly visit over weekends.
During my visit in last week we observed the restaurant capacity was full and every employee was busy attending the guest as the restaurant was jam-packed. I envisaged due to increase in number of guest at restaurant, the chef's and kitchen team might have overlooked on the hygiene factor of the food served to the customer.
We visited restaurant on last week Saturday i.e. 15th February 2019 around 08:00 PM. We were family of four members and we ordered Indian and Chinese cuisine. In the Indian cuisine we ordered Rice, Dal Fry, Cottage Cheese and flatten breads while Chinese food we just ordered Noodles and Dumplings. After starting our meal we felt some foul smell in the food for which we complaint to the staff who was attending our family. To our surprise he did not feel that food was bad and did not agreed for replacement. We left the restaurant around 09:00 PM as my daughter started having stomach ache. The next day morning we all went to hospital due to severe stomach ache and after the diagnosis we found out that we all got infected with food poisoning.
It took three days for use to get cure and start our daily routine. As a regular customer of your renowned restaurant this was a horrifying experience for me and my family. We are sure we will never visit the restaurant again however your should focus on food quality else these types of issues may impact your restaurant brand image.
Your Truly
M. XXXXX
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 488, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'agree'
Suggestion: agree
... not feel that food was bad and did not agreed for replacement. We left the restaurant...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 24, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ood poisoning. It took three days for use to get cure and start our daily routine...
^^^
Line 6, column 235, Rule ID: YOUR_SHOULD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you'?
Suggestion: you
...ever visit the restaurant again however your should focus on food quality else these...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 937.175257732 149% => OK
No of words: 298.0 206.0 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6744966443 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39976998808 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 127.690721649 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573825503356 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 290.88556701 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8421391727 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8666666667 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201963994421 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719184057544 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062089753292 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12874899368 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600108850139 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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