A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
I agree with the statement to an extent when a standard curriculum of core subjects, is followed nationwide. some subjects, for instance, mathematics, science, for which, the core principles are defined and subjects which help the students in building their career further must be predefined and followed nationwide.
In some part of the world, differences of belief, culture also has an effect on learning. some countries make a compulsion of learning a native language while some want their young citizens to join the military. There are states where physical education is given the most importance. Teaching subjects like history will be difficult to define as a standardized curriculum because each country has their own history. Another difficult task would be to pre-define the curriculum of learning about one's own culture is, which is also more desired over other subjects in some parts of the world.
Furthermore, a flexible curriculum will be helpful for the child to be able to decide his/her plans. Factors like geographical regions, a political and economic status of one's own country, personal background, and how technology-advanced one's country is, also molds one's brain to into pursuing a particular field of study. In such cases, making strict syllabus will only demotivate the students.
In addition to this, the college or university the student goes to will also have prerequisites of subjects or skills, if the curriculum is so rigid that one cannot learn only the things necessary for one's further studies, it can be counted as a waste of time and efforts and energy.
In a nutshell, core subjects which are a must for anyone can be set as mandatory curriculum also the schools should have an authority to add more subjects as required.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, while, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 33.0505617978 27% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 287.0 442.535393258 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17421602787 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91097414484 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578397212544 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3078896259 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.75 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 5.21951772744 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0541423021623 0.243740707755 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0211815104451 0.0831039109588 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0194166216682 0.0758088955206 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0358938745624 0.150359130593 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0136833256401 0.0667264976115 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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