Dear Sir,
I hope you are well and safe. I am writing this to request you for a reference letter for a job application.
There is a job opening available for the position of Senior Architect at Gensler. Inc in Bangalore for which I am planning to send an application . The firm is specifically looking for someone who has an understanding of high rise buildings. The firm as you might be knowing, has a good reputation in our country as well as internationally. I strongly believe that I would be the perfect candidate for the position. Working for this position would enhance my interests and would be a perfect opportunity to implement my past research and explore my passion for skyscrapers further.
Since you are familiar with my extensive thesis on High rise buildings during my graduation thesis and the appreciation it has received, I hope you can address my research and my dedication towards the work I am being assigned. It would be of great help if you can provide me this letter of reference by the end of next week.
Looking forward to a positive reply.
Yours faithfully,
Dave Jacobs
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ich I am planning to send an application . The firm is specifically looking for so...
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Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...h rise buildings. The firm as you might be knowing, has a good reputation in our country a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.85567010309 337% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.765625 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96855471723 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588541666667 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7251234423 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.25 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198715434572 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805331697887 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949593529793 0.0603063233224 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134930696687 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127526227754 0.0580467560999 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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