Crime rate has been rising steadily every year. While some countries practice death penalty, many believe that new ways should be implemented to reduce the number of serious crimes being committed. In my opinion, though there is hope for criminals to reform themselves through other methods, Death penalties are inevitable in the modern world.
Most of the countries these have laws which allow the judiciary systems to sentence criminals to death. It is considered by many that death penalty is an effective way to control criminals as they induce fear among them & stop them from committing similar crimes.
On the other hand, some people believe that other methods have to be implemented to control the crimes. They argue that everyone has a right to live & death sentence is against the order of nature. Instead, they suggest that criminals should be given opportunity to reform themselves through other ways like rigorous imprisonment, volunteering work etc.
Even though it makes sense that criminals should be given a chance to change themselves, studies have shown that most of the people who have committed serious crimes, even after being imprisoned for many years tend to repeat them after they are released. These people do not have any right to be a part of the society as it seems to be nearly impossible for them to respect & care for others’ lives. Their existence itself poses a threat to the people around.
To summarize, it is important for the criminals to be punished seriously when they commit a crime so that they do not think of repeating their acts. But, when the crime is committed for the second time it is necessary to induce death penalty against them in view of the safety of the society & setting an example to fellow criminals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, second, so, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97972972973 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52462538475 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530405405405 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2187025826 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.384615385 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33627939817 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120457970744 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823455380467 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193452124485 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061773254836 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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