Social networking has become an integral part of everyone’s daily life, including youngsters’ these days. Since it is practically impossible to control the access to content on the internet, many people have faced serious problems. This essay will address the root causes and potential solutions to such issues.
Firstly, since internet, social media in particular, is part of life since young age, it is important for kids to get educated about the internet. It is the responsibility of parents and schools to teach how one should behave responsibly in the internet and benefit out of it. For example, many schools these days are trying to educate the students about the advantages and potential threats of the internet by organizing lectures by experts in the industry and law enforcement agencies. Even though this would help the students get a basic idea of internet, it doesn’t address the students of younger and elder students as per their level of understanding. It is essential for schools to add internet as a topic in the curriculum at different grades, which would in particular address the issue for students in different age groups.
Secondly, it is necessary for parents to keep a track of whom their kids are meeting in the outside world. It is very common nowadays for people to make friends online. Though, this helps kids to meet people from different backgrounds which could possibly help them diversify their circle of friends, there is no denying that they could be lured by negative elements of the society. In case of any suspicion, it is necessary for parents to report to the cyber crime authorities immediately. In countries like India, such incidents are common on a daily basis where kids and women are attracted and trapped by some people on the internet, when met physically turn out to be a case of kidnapping, rape or even murder.
To conclude, it is the collective responsibility of the society to keep the internet safe and at the same time to keep an eye on their kids and make sure they reap benefits out of the internet and not fall prey to it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'could'.
Suggestion: could
...people from different backgrounds which could possibly help them diversify their circle of fri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89325842697 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75547337238 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52808988764 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.1358116571 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.428571429 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4285714286 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121887940536 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425398755342 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.01854130677 0.0667982634062 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731989078586 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015088360455 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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