You were absent from an important event held by the company you work for. Write a letter to your manager to apologize for this absence. In your letter:
• Tell your manager what event it was
• Say how important the event was
• State the reasons for your absence
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Manoj Mehta working as a senior HR with "Dhruv Consultancy".The company organised an event last week.I am writing this to express my sincere apology as I could not attend it due to some unavoidable circumstances.A programme was about to present an award to those employees who did well as a new cumer in last one year.I was selected as one of the jury member being an old employee of this organisation.As this was my first experience,I was equally interested and looking forward to it.
The main reason that I could not join was my child's ill health.In the same week,my son Vikram met with a small accident while he was practicing for his cycle race.His left leg got injured and doctor advised him to take enough rest and proper medications.Me and my wife,both are working;we decided to take leave one by one and to take care of him for his speedy recovery.
I hope you will understand this and forgive me because I have a genuine reason.
Looking forward for your response.
Yours sincerely,
Manoj Mehta
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...rd for your response. Yours sincerely, Manoj Mehta
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01772541274 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683333333333 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 16.3608247423 220% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 200.46386208 44.8134815571 447% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.8 76.5299724578 226% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 36.0 16.8248392259 214% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.4 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22703283419 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131619364532 0.0766984524023 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533923397466 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13187933966 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597915664666 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 8.37731958763 229% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 70.7449484536 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 7.45979381443 217% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 8.62886597938 342% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 8.54432989691 192% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.