You are applying for a job and need your letter of reference. Write a letter to former teacher. In your letter:
Give details of the job
Explain why it is important to you
Suggest what information you are teacher could put in the reference
Dear ma'am ,
I am Sakshi,one of your scholars of 2018 batch from computer science department, writing this letter to seek your assistance for writing a reference letter. Since I passed my graduation I have been searching for a job in the search field, Luckily, I got one. I am really overwhelmed by sharing this information with you, that my profile has been selected for bioinformatics in IBM. And there I am going to work as a team of three.
As you are aware that I am passionate for this job irrespective of working environment but I am blessed that I will get an opportunity to interact with professionals with like-minded because a meeting is organised by Centre twice a year.The main reason for not to miss this opportunity is that this job is my dream job, as well as I would acquire much more by collaboration.
As my mentor you are aware about my strong and negative points which you observe. Therefore I find you to be the perfect person to write a letter of reference to me. Could you please do this favour and kindly mention all my achievements regarding my project,too.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely
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| 2021-08-17 | SKN | 81 | view |
| 2020-12-08 | sakshi2424 | 73 | view |
| 2020-11-25 | anshuldineshgupta1986 | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Dear maam , I am Sakshi,one of your scholars of 20...
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Line 2, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , one
Dear maam , I am Sakshi,one of your scholars of 2018 batch from com...
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Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ing is organised by Centre twice a year.The main reason for not to miss this opport...
^^^
Line 4, column 82, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... and negative points which you observe. Therefore I find you to be the perfect person to ...
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Line 4, column 257, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , too
...all my achievements regarding my project,too. I look forward to hearing from you so...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, really, regarding, so, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65024630542 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94703664558 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615763546798 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.3602096303 44.8134815571 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 104.888888889 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 4.34317383033 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303131193958 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120727925384 0.0766984524023 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07743485979 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168763565047 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652599181903 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.