You are a club secretary. An expert from a different country recently gave a talk at the club. Write a letter to thank him/her and say how club members enjoyed it. Include the following in your letter:
– When and where did the talk take place?
– Explain why the members enjoyed it.
– Suggest another lecture to be done in the future.
Dear Mr Daniel,
I am Harry singh, club secretary of villa del Rio apartments India. it was an immense pleasure to attend your lecture on the 'benefits of healthy diet'. I am writing this letter to thank you on behalf of all the club members and the audience.
It was a real eye opener for many of us, the way you discuss benefits of healthy diet on the occasion of national yoga day in our club house. The audience appreciated that you provided balanced diet chart for both vegetarians as well as non vegetarians. In this busy life style, we are so much engaged in other issues that we forgot to keep up a healthy diet. Your quick cooking tips for healthy food was like an icing on the cake. The members loved your lecture so much that they even bought a CD of your lecture to share your views with their loved ones as well.
I request you to book another session with us on the new year eve, I know you must be having busy schedules, it would be really appreciated, if you accept our proposal. Once again thankyou so much , you are an amazing speaker. I look forward to meet you again.
Yours sincerely
harry sandhu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr Daniel, I am Harry singh, club secretary of vill...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...tary of villa del Rio apartments India. it was an immense pleasure to attend your ...
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Line 4, column 227, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...alanced diet chart for both vegetarians as well as non vegetarians. In this busy life styl...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ppreciated, if you accept our proposal. Once again thankyou so much , you are an...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... Once again thankyou so much , you are an amazing speaker. I look forw...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
... are an amazing speaker. I look forward to meet you again. Yours sincerely har...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aker. I look forward to meet you again. Yours sincerely harry sandhu
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...to meet you again. Yours sincerely harry sandhu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39234449761 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28628961013 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626794258373 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0814275361 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163303724253 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632063034931 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639436508681 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122134682204 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068490871065 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.