You are a commuter. One morning on your way to work you suddenly fell ill and lost your consciousness. One gentleman on the same bus sent you to a hospital.
Write a letter to the company where the gentlemen work to extend your gratefulness.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to write this letter to express my gratitude to Mr. Kevin, a software engineer of your organization, for his incredible act that has help me to overcome a dangerous moment in my life.
Yesterday morning, I was on my way to work. Me and Mr. Kevin travelled on the same bus, of course we didn’t know each other and haven’t met before. He was standing next to me on the bus when I suddenly had a cardiac arrest, and I became unconscious soon after. From what I have been told after I woke up in the hospital hours later, it was Mr. Kevin who was quick to react when he performed first-aid operation and take me to the nearest hospital. Mr. Kevin was kind enough to make sure that I was in good care despite he was late for work. Thanks to his action, I was saved with just a minor issue and will be recovered soon.
I hope that his action is well-aware and honored.
Best regards,
Henry
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, well, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32386363636 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40409403522 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664772727273 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4961606751 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5555555556 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0804557275637 0.216113520407 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0338423319222 0.0766984524023 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338707739128 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0458947876148 0.12726935374 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334297213874 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.