You bought a concert ticket. However, you are unable to go, so you decide to offer the ticket to a friend.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
- Tell your friend the details about the concert
- Explain why you are unable to go
- And explain how your friend can receive your ticket
Dear Amee,
I hope you are doing well during your semester at McGill University. I have been missing you since we met last March.
Do you remember the last time I told you that I always wished one day I would be able to go to the concert of Big Bang? They are my favourite K-Pop boy band, and I also know that we share the same passion for them. And can you guess what, they are going to hold a concert this Saturday evening at Bell Center, near my place, quite amazing!
I was so excited when I learnt this news that I immediately bought a ticket. But unfortunately, I forgot that I have to attend a meeting with a client from Europe. But due to the different time-zone, the meeting is at night, so I couldn’t go to the concert, that is very disappointing for me. But anyway, are you free around that time? If you are able to go, I will be more than happy to give you the ticket.
If you can make it, come to my place on Saturday morning. We can have a little chit-chat and enjoy lunch together. Moreover, Bell Center is only 5 minutes away, so it will be convenient for you to go there.
I know you won’t refuse this offer since this is also your dream, so see you on Saturday!
Your friend,
Kevin
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 293, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ert, that is very disappointing for me. But anyway, are you free around that time? ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, if, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 51.0 32.9175257732 155% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.18803418803 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33026315657 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58547008547 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3346853504 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3846153846 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344886144772 0.216113520407 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114891435884 0.0766984524023 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925465863338 0.0603063233224 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174726333154 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378455718704 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.73 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.35 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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