You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter:•explain your situation•describe your problems•tell him/her when you think you can start

Essay topics:

You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter:
• explain your situation
• describe your problems
• tell him/her when you think you can start

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Dear
dear sir, I am writing to you...
^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
dear sir, I am writing to you about your decision ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...losing the sports and leisure center. sir, I live in this district since I was...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 13, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sir
...ports and leisure center. sir, I live in this district since I was a ...
^^^
Line 4, column 176, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...laying football and playing basketball. in addition, it is very safe for children ...
^^
Line 4, column 307, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Me
...ermore, there are a lot of restaurants. me and my family enjoying our time when we...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our district to have such his center. I would deeply appreciate it if you coul...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...iate it if you could change your mind. yours faithfully.
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 499.0 937.175257732 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 110.0 206.0 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53636363636 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.23853184046 3.78020617076 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65362686472 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 127.690721649 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.681818181818 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 149.4 290.88556701 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6086348513 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1666666667 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173845751064 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092886419246 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928649761996 0.0603063233224 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144767915159 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856134796814 0.0580467560999 147% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 41.2886597938 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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