You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter:
• explain your situation
• describe your problems
• tell him/her when you think you can start.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you that unfortunately I won't be able to start working in the consensus date due to some issues that happened to me earlier this week, as I supposed to begin my duty on the may 21th, however, my parents came from Syria to see me after a very long time and they will get back home on the same day of my joining date.
In fact my parents are visiting Toronto for the first time and they know nothing here. Therefore, I have to help them during their journey especially in the last couple of days, hence, they might need to go for shopping in order to purchase some souvenirs to their friends and relatives. Thereafter, I will drop them at the airport and wait them until they ride the plane in case they need any assistance as both of them didn't speak english very well.
Thus, I would be extremely grateful if it possible for me to start my duty on the next day, May 22nd to be fully ready for starting my job, and you can also deduct that days from my holiday allowance if you wish.
Finally I hope that my request does not cause you any inconvenience.
Best regards
Bilal.A.Ab
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...hey need any assistance as both of them didnt speak english very well. Thus, I w...
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... you any inconvenience. Best regards Bilal.A.Ab
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...inconvenience. Best regards Bilal.A.Ab
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...convenience. Best regards Bilal.A.Ab
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, i suppose, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40375586854 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32873314967 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633802816901 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.567539296 44.8134815571 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 134.0 76.5299724578 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4285714286 16.8248392259 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1428571429 4.34317383033 303% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166623941318 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663765743197 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713751672013 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113315935569 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627040777687 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 8.37731958763 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 8.15463917526 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.