You are dur to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter.
-explain your situation
-describe your problems
-tell him/her when you think you can move in
Dear mrs Ekaterina Anatolievna,
I will want to write you about our arrangement. I am supposed to move into a rented house which locate in Novosibirsk Aviastroiteley street, apartment number 218. However I will not be able to go because I have 2 main problems.
Firstly my boss does not want to give me day off on arrangement time. He told me that I need him for important project which my team and me have started recently.Currently we are working on big project a skyscraper, first skyscraper in Novosibirsk cities.
Second reason is my mother will visit me. She has told me recently. It is the huge problem for me because she can not move by own. It is consequence the car crash. I have to look after for her and help her.
I would like to move day of booking my apartment one week later. And I really appreciated it if you can understand my situation and help me.
Best regards,
Maxim Karasev
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...troiteley street, apartment number 218. However I will not be able to go because I have...
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Line 9, column 145, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ortant project which my team and me have started recently.Currently we are workin...
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Line 9, column 164, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Currently
...h my team and me have started recently.Currently we are working on big project a skyscra...
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Line 13, column 132, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for me because she can not move by own. It is consequence the car crash. I have ...
^^
Line 17, column 93, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... week later. And I really appreciated it if you can understand my situation and h...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, really, second, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64024390244 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91797441009 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670731707317 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.616451003 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.5384615385 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6153846154 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179005215068 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613594066062 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060211812716 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962694305996 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085355056727 0.0580467560999 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.74 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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