You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter,
1-Explain your situation
2-Describe your problems
3-Tell him/her when you think you can move in
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter with regards to the move in date into the new apartment on 7th July i.e. next month. Due to unforeseen situations, I may have to shift by end of October on account of employment commitment.
Let me explain in detail. my new employer wants me join work as soon as possible and thus shifted my joining date from 15th to 1st July. Initially, my plan was to take a week off from work and settle down in the new place and also get familiar with the area. However, due to this sudden change my itinerary has gone haywire, leaving me with no time to adjust.
Therefore, could you please speed up all the major renovations so that I can set up the house immediately. In addition, some minor work can continue even after I start staying there.
I look forward to your reply and hope you consider my situation favorably.
Your Faithfully,
Mary Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 27, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...ommitment. Let me explain in detail. my new employer wants me join work as soon...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 743.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55828220859 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47326781995 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.723926380368 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4127883206 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177303599694 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651247399311 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597007480629 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110583733015 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643700241775 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.