You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
give details of your study plans
explain why you want to get a part-time job
suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Priya,
I am happy to inform you that I would be coming soon to Canada to complete my master's degree in avionics. This morning, I got the confirmation mail from my University stating that my application for the study abroad program is approved and I would be completing my last two semesters in Canada. I am writing this mail to enquire about some information before I make preparations for traveling.
Before diving into the questions, let me first explain to you my study plan. The university that has shortlisted my student profile has classes only from Monday to Friday. I have got all morning classes, therefore, my evening would be completely free. I can study during the weekends or late nights. Since they do not believe in giving assignments, I won't have to worry about it during the week. The only thing that the University demands are to provide weekly study reports which I can easily manage finishing on weekends.
Coming to the funding for my stay in Canada, my tuition and hostel fees would be covered by the scholarship that the State is going to provide. However, I would need to work part-time for food and other expenses. Since it is a student visa, I cannot work in corporate offices related to my field, I thought of working at restaurants or some shops as temporary staff.
Finally, the reason I am writing you the mail is to ask for your help in searching for some part-time jobs for myself. It will be a great help if you could make a list of possible jobs and share them with me so that I can follow up with them once I land in Canada. I am looking forward to meeting you soon. Take care of yourself and aunty.
Yours faithfully,
Madhulika
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 52.0 32.9175257732 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 937.175257732 147% => OK
No of words: 301.0 206.0 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57142857143 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5898794634 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 127.690721649 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 433.8 290.88556701 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6298114404 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9411764706 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7058823529 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.82352941176 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26128260337 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829569186828 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789595964058 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149835510749 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823111789621 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 41.2886597938 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.