Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.
Nowadays, people find it difficult to start a reliable relationship because cheating is prevalent in the environment; however,initially invisible, it gradually sows in one's habit. To keep our relationships secured and stable, I agree with the statement that telling the truth is essential for any relationship. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explain in the essay.
Firstly, telling the truth increases truthworthiness of a person. Intuitively, honesty is a human virtue. As we know, truthworthiness roots from truth until it branches to other aspects: integrity and tact. For example, a businessman who gives a promise and follow it well gains the reputation from his customers. Consequently, these customers become his long-term business partner because they believe that he is reliable and will not deceive them. Therefore, compared to relationship, trustworthy increases safety and stability in lives that leads to a long-lasting relationship.
Moreover, telling the truth reduces stress in relationship. As we know, relationship can either bring happiness or tragedy to a person. A person with a healthy relationship might feel like attaining nirvana while a person who sinks in a toxic relationship can face depression. A relationship without honesty can make a person worried all the time. For example, I have a friend whose boyfriend cheated on her once before, but still they haven't broken up. My friend is still continuing the relationship because she cherishes him. However, she is worried every time he is not around her: she is afraid that he is flirting with other girls as he did before. As a result, she is obsessed with his private life and diagnosed with obsessive compulsive disorder. Therefore, a relationship without telling the truth can cause a person with mental health issues.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that telling the truth is essential for the relationship for two reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , initially
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2996742671 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21496556203 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560260586319 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8125843249 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6315789474 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1578947368 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36842105263 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228553521534 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830682322676 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919473341389 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156776272248 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272173020378 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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