People have a lot of opinions about the value of advanced education. Which do you think is the most important reason to attend college or university?
new experiences
career preparation
increased knowledge
Which do you prefer? Why?
Problems are part of everyone’s life. Every living creature on the earth have their own set of problems. As the well-known “Every lock has its key” same way every problem has one or the other solution. Sometimes we are just unable to find that on our own. In such cases I will prefer to ask someone with more experience for advice. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the essay.
Firstly, everyone of us will agree that experience comes with age. So, when we are stuck in any situation then going to any elder or more experienced is the best option. Going to elders does not mean that they must have faced the same situation in past but, going to them we can get realistic solution to our problems. I usually go to my parents when I have some problems. I remember the days of my graduation when I was at a completely new place with new people. I was feeling left out due to my introvert nature. That was the time when my mother helped me out and gave me ideas to make new friends and those ideas worked best for me. She was my shining angel.
Additionally, sharing our problems with other can also help us to get a third person’s perspective of the situation. Sometimes, we only see one side of it but by sharing with someone can get a more realistic picture. Moreover, we also have the habit of overthinking and take stress for no reason. So, even in such situation that can be helpful. Sharing can also work as remedy as we feel lighter and may be realize there wasn’t much to take stress. I personally have a habit of overthinking even the smallest things. So, whenever I face such situation. I just run to my elder sister and tell her the things going on in my mind. That helps me a lot in sorting my problem.
In conclusion, among the given choices I will always choose to go to someone and ask advice for my problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 464, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...a completely new place with new people. I was feeling left out due to my introver...
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Line 3, column 517, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , whenever” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... overthinking even the smallest things. So, whenever I face such situation. I just run to my...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, then, third, well, as to, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35734870317 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46545113222 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533141210375 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.620407819 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.0 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4583333333 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04166666667 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0577324126747 0.236089414692 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0184105027233 0.076458572812 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0240311784723 0.0737576698707 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0334296555205 0.150856017488 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237752529958 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 11.7677419355 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 10.9000537634 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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