You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
give details of your study plans
explain why you want to get a part-time job
suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Sam,
Hope this letter finds you hale & hearty. I am delighted to tell you that I got addmission in 2 Years MBA Exec. Program in University of London. I am pretty much excited to join the classes. The course is of two years with 4 smesters with specialization in Marketing. The course will commence on July 10th & I shall fly to london on 1st of July to make necessary arrangements for accomodation.
As you are aware that my father has paid all dues for this program & now I have planned to do a part time job along side studies to bear my accdomodation & day to day expenses. I do not want to put more burden on him in this regard.
This really gives me a sense of relief that I have someone known to such big metropilton city. I seek your support to guide me about all possible ways to find appropriate job that I can do with my studies. i have enclosed my resume with this letter so that you can drop it to all potential job locations. Also, I have started applying online through different job portal where I look forward to you to recommend me as a valuable employee. I am sure your help will pave a way for me to get a suitable part time job for me.
I am very excited to meet you after a long time.
Yours Sincerely,
Samantha
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sam, Hope this letter finds you hale & hearty...
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Line 4, column 97, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...is program & now I have planned to do a part time job along side studies to bear my accdo...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 111, Rule ID: ALONG_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'alongside'?
Suggestion: alongside
...ow I have planned to do a part time job along side studies to bear my accdomodation & day ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...iate job that I can do with my studies. i have enclosed my resume with this lette...
^
Line 5, column 501, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ill pave a way for me to get a suitable part time job for me. I am very excited to meet...
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Line 8, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... after a long time. Yours Sincerely, Samantha
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27426160338 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5713957763 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603375527426 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9719901931 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.5333333333 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.73333333333 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275537789687 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859559652905 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669028523739 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157289148119 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299384976493 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.19 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.