You live in a small town of 10,000 people. A large green area in the centre of town is undeveloped. The city has sent out an opinion survey to see what residents would like to have built in that area.
keeping the essential factor of environmental health, all of the places where we can keep nature as is and ensure our children being benefited from the greenery mostly people would suggest utilizing the green area by building a recreational park where children can play in the fresh air. I shall be discussing certain reasons for opting option b and building recreational parks in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, the world is becoming a global village as we are building more and more cement structures and demolishing the countrysides rapidly. In this era, it is quite important to preserve nature and make sure that we let our next generation breath in a healthy and clean environment. By building the recreational park, we are paving way for the children to do physical activities and avoid using gadgets. Furthermore, dedicating a particular area for petting zoo would encourage adolescents to know more about different animals and spend some quality time with them.
The prime purpose of this recreational park is to ensure that adolescents participate in a physical activity that would energize them and also they could avoid some time from the artificial world of computers and mobile phones.
To recapitulate the aforementioned, I reiterate that in my opinion instead of building malls and cinemas, consideration should be put forward towards our children's health and well being.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Keeping
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, well, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97844105383 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617777777778 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.4837991976 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.375 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.125 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0511031627133 0.244688304435 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0202721402464 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0251196797423 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0296637847624 0.151304729494 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0117827368011 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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