You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,- give details of your study plans- explain why

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You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,

- give details of your study plans
- explain why you want to get a part-time job
- suggest how your friend could help you find a job

Dear Gowtham,

Hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to inform you that I have been accepted to the Post-Graduation course in Marketing at Southern Illinois University, Carbandale lately.

Well I am fairly excited to move to new country and start my college. I have been provided with scholarship for my tuition fee, which is a big relief for me. At the same time I am bit concerned about my daily expenses such as food, rent and others during the stay. So I am thinking of doing part time job which servers my purpose. This will help me in habituating to the new culture and place as well.

As you are staying in the same locality, it would be very handy for me if you can enquire in some of the store for any active vacancies. I will much appreciate your help and hope to meet you soon.

Warm Regards,

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 181, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
...ig relief for me. At the same time I am bit concerned about my daily expenses such ...
^^^
Line 6, column 292, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ing the stay. So I am thinking of doing part time job which servers my purpose. This will...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 94, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...very handy for me if you can enquire in some of the store for any active vacancies. I will ...
^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 684.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44155844156 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49123949977 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655844155844 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3689236914 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244981847502 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888832226631 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772030796505 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17475905504 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863894607299 0.0580467560999 149% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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