You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • Give details of your study plan • Explain why you want to get a part-time job
Dear Reza
it’s been a while since we have seen each other so I hope this letter find you well. Actually as I moving to your country I am writing to ask you helping me with finding adequate information about part-time job in Australia.
I’ve applied for a course in Sydney university and I’m going to be there next semester and it will take approximately 4 years. As you know due to some financial issues, I have decided to find a part-job to tackle it. Furthermore, I want to gain experience and improve my CV which will help me for finding job in the future. So it is important for me to know about job situation in Australia. Would you please tell me which sources do you suggest to find information for job vacancies and their details likes requirements, wages and etc. and whether it is possible to have job interview via Skype or phone.
I would be thankful for your kind reply.
Best wishes
Davod
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 103, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
... this letter find you well. Actually as I moving to your country I am writing to ...
^
Line 3, column 448, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest finding'.
Suggestion: suggest finding
...you please tell me which sources do you suggest to find information for job vacancies and their...
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Line 3, column 538, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...their details likes requirements, wages and etc. and whether it is possible to have job ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 41, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... would be thankful for your kind reply. Best wishes Davod
^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'furthermore', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'you know']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.210526315789 0.220444632235 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.194736842105 0.167888034529 116% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0578947368421 0.0606518309736 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0263157894737 0.0506257000042 52% => OK
Pronouns: 0.147368421053 0.118615021944 124% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0947368421053 0.107062808482 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0526315789474 0.041066498444 128% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.6610486922 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0526315789474 0.0385302599488 137% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0368421052632 0.0714148451538 52% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0210526315789 0.0191574576366 110% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0105263157895 0.00930345855455 113% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 921.0 1141.60824742 81% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.134020619 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54819277108 5.53046319177 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78085437643 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.289156626506 0.284621296913 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.228915662651 0.211203875043 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.144578313253 0.133321485273 108% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.102409638554 0.0843313296314 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6610486922 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650602409639 0.622163163488 105% => OK
Word variations: 63.314950027 62.8969750728 101% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 12.9587628866 77% => OK
Sentence length: 16.6 16.4300151701 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5981526673 44.7399317507 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1 90.9928171075 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 16.4300151701 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.613754768223 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.09278350515 191% => OK
Readability: 39.4915662651 37.5504026743 105% => OK
Elegance: 0.971428571429 1.13073093955 86% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40873215199 0.331212695627 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0660095086653 0.0927372745006 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0514273414859 0.0736520305886 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.590583911746 0.579516596996 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.153742208248 0.180689518051 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162417537517 0.122183219658 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0991246252771 0.0765303033291 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.19727268691 0.211926503985 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.117256523553 0.0737400523855 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256057383061 0.203819188451 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115441838907 0.067151250289 172% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.45360824742 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.0206185567 75% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 4.73195876289 127% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.56701030928 117% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 8.32989690722 108% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.