You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
- gives details of your study plans
- explain why you want to get a part-time job
-suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Robert,
I hope you are doing well. The purpose of writing a letter is to inform you that I have been admitted into Business Administration, masters program of two years in George Washington University. I will be coming to Washington on 1st September, 2018.
I was quite uncertain about the expenses I will be having monthly or during my stay other than my tution expenses. So I thought to discuss some possible aspects with you.
I believe a part-time job will be necessary in order to hear my monthly expenses like rental, food and transportation mainly.
It would be great if you can refer me for a part-time job where you work currently or let me know if there are any recruitment companies or placement department who can help me out.
Looking forward to your positive response.
Best regards,
Osama
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-29 | Bharat11189 | 84 | view |
| 2019-12-25 | PALAK AHUJA | 78 | view |
| 2019-12-23 | Sogol | 84 | view |
| 2019-12-13 | tasneemazim | 73 | view |
| 2019-12-12 | Prachi Agrawal | 78 | view |
- A close friend is coming to visit you he she has asked you for advice for things to do in your hometown and the surrounding area Write a letter to your friend In your letter ask more details about your friend s plans Suggest some places to visit and thing 75
- You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter- gives details of your study plans- explain wh 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Robert, I hope you are doing well. The purpose o...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n admitted into Business Administration, masters program of two years in George W...
^^
Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'September 2018'.
Suggestion: September 2018
.... I will be coming to Washington on 1st September, 2018. I was quite uncertain about the exp...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e coming to Washington on 1st September, 2018. I was quite uncertain about the...
^^
Line 13, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our positive response. Best regards, Osama
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 689.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 141.0 206.0 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8865248227 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83029377432 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.737588652482 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5073123867 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5555555556 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259616868927 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089041188795 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753645139179 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117814116675 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545333442803 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.