You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
give details of your study plans
explain why you want to get a part-time job
suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Hi Thang,
How are you ? I am hope you are alway happy.
I am writting email to inform you next week i will have a study course in your country. And it takes about 3 months, may be it will start from 30thMay to 26thAug. this course is about Mechandiser Apperal, it's a good chance for my improve skill. Because it will teach all method work like sewing, pattern, cutting... then i hope after finish this i can get a higher ability and can have a good job after that.
Now i think i need to find a part - time job in time i am studying for earn money. Due to i have to learn in whole day from Monday to Saturday, so i only can work at night time. And also the working time is not too long because i need to study also. then can you give me some ideas for which job i can do.
I am looking for you reply email
Your friend .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi Thang, How are you ? I am hope you are alway happy. I am...
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Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... writting email to inform you next week i will have a study course in your countr...
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Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
...r country. And it takes about 3 months, may be it will start from 30thMay to 26thAug. ...
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Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... it will start from 30thMay to 26thAug. this course is about Mechandiser Apperal, it...
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Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...is course is about Mechandiser Apperal, its a good chance for my improve skill. Bec...
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Line 5, column 322, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...k like sewing, pattern, cutting... then i hope after finish this i can get a high...
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Line 5, column 347, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...utting... then i hope after finish this i can get a higher ability and can have a...
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Line 7, column 5, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...can have a good job after that. Now i think i need to find a part - time job ...
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Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... a good job after that. Now i think i need to find a part - time job in time ...
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Line 7, column 54, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... need to find a part - time job in time i am studying for earn money. Due to i ha...
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Line 7, column 229, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...he working time is not too long because i need to study also. then can you give ...
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Line 7, column 238, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g time is not too long because i need to study also. then can you give me some id...
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Line 7, column 246, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...s not too long because i need to study also. then can you give me some ideas for wh...
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Line 7, column 252, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Then
...too long because i need to study also. then can you give me some ideas for which jo...
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Line 7, column 298, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...an you give me some ideas for which job i can do. I am looking for you reply e...
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Line 11, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...oking for you reply email Your friend .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, may, so, then, as for, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 669.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.00598802395 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.00967383606 2.54303337028 79% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622754491018 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.7720195052 44.8134815571 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.75 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9166666667 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270006714665 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104176439226 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937654851655 0.0603063233224 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163918761046 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395535009577 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.4 8.37731958763 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 92.12 70.7449484536 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.6 7.45979381443 48% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.39 8.71597938144 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.55 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 8.15463917526 49% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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