You are going away to travel for the summer. A friend will be looking after your house while you are away. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
– say where you are going
– describe your house
– explain some of the things your friend must do to look after your house
Dear Jot,
Thank you in advance for looking after my house and my pet when I would be on vacation. I am very excited to go to the USA. It is indeed a dream coming true now.
Actually, I would like to tell you that my house was under renovation and its work completed last week only. You have not been to my home for the last 2 months I would like to tell you I have added some changes to the house. The fridge has been shifted to the kitchen and the lobby has been equipped with the television, you can find the remote in the first drawer of the center table.
I just want to let you that just keep the lights of the living room on at night and clean the mailbox every day. You need to feed my little puppy twice a day and pedigree is placed in the pantry. Apart from this, please fill his water bowl in the morning and take him for the walk every evening. She is very friendly.
In case of any emergency do call on my personal number 837383884. Once again thank you and I will not forget that I owe you a treat in return for this favor.
Yours Truly,
Jot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, look, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.02358490566 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.93846117306 2.54303337028 76% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61320754717 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9427367467 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.6153846154 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3076923077 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220088033735 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694583566639 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608665606069 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112869373183 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388841169417 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 89.08 70.7449484536 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.74 8.71597938144 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.37 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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