Crime rate is decrease compared to the past due to the advance in technology as it can prevent and solve the crime. To what extent you agree or disagree.
The technology advancement in some sector resulted in boom for instance, security. In the last few year a drastic decrease in the crime rate has been witnessed and most of the people attribute this change to advancement in technology. I firmly agree with the opinion that these inventions have assisted a lot in solving and preventing the crimes.
Technological advancement led a great role in curbing the ever raising crime. Earlier there were more incidents of crime in the shops, houses or office but nowadays, cameras are installed for in the most of the places. This cameras record the unusual activities happening in the surrounding, unusual behavior of the customer which help to minimize the thefts. It is mostly noticed that most of the jewelry shop, Automatic Teller Machine or public palace have the cameras for the proper surveillance so that any illegal activities can be stopped.
Apart from this, it also help in solving different case such as abduction or kidnap or mobile phone stealing as there is a GPS installed in all the mobile phone which her the police and other securities in tracking. Perhaps, now it has become easy to retrieve lost cellphone immediately because virtually location system are always on which let other know about the proper location help to find the offender. Moreover, it helped in solving lots of abduction cases as nowadays everyone possess handset as earlier explained most of the smart phones have location features which help to find the criminal.
To summarize, the technology advancement helped not only preventing the case but also played a great role in solving the problem by discussing the location and face through camera surveillance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun year seems to be countable; consider using: 'few years'.
Suggestion: few years
...oom for instance, security. In the last few year a drastic decrease in the crime rate ha...
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Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...n be stopped. Apart from this, it also help in solving different case such as abduc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, apart from, as for, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10791366906 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71834891753 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579136690647 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.2372990257 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.090909091 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175575733822 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734816514331 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631669003023 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120499759503 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766983504553 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.