You are going away to travel for the summer. A friend will be looking after your house while you are away. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter:
• Say where you are going
• Describe your house
• Explain some of the things your friend must do to look after your house
Dear Opeyemi,
Thank you for agreeing to look over my place next week as I will be out-of-town. I am traveling to Ilorin for my brothers wedding ceremony and should be back by month end.
you have been to my house before. However, for ease and comfort i will be describing it for you. The house is a yellow coloured building at the beginning of the street. it is a mini flat with only one bedroom, living room, toilet,kitchen and bathroom. my food items are safely stored inside the wardrobe at the corridor, you may need them if you need to cook.
Kindly help me feed my dog and clean it house every money to reduce his barking all through the night. Also, the vegetables i planted at the balcony needs watering daily to keep the nutrients and increase the span life.Furthermore, you would need to warm my car daily so the car battery will not run out.
I would stop by after work tomorrow to hand over my house keys to you. thank you and God bless.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Opeyemi, Thank you for agreeing to look over my p...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...ny and should be back by month end. you have been to my house before. However, ...
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Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e before. However, for ease and comfort i will be describing it for you. The hous...
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Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...uilding at the beginning of the street. it is a mini flat with only one bedroom, l...
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Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , kitchen
...th only one bedroom, living room, toilet,kitchen and bathroom. my food items are safely ...
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Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...ving room, toilet,kitchen and bathroom. my food items are safely stored inside the...
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Line 7, column 41, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'houses'?
Suggestion: houses
...Kindly help me feed my dog and clean it house every money to reduce his barking all t...
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Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...through the night. Also, the vegetables i planted at the balcony needs watering d...
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Line 7, column 220, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
...he nutrients and increase the span life.Furthermore, you would need to warm my car daily so...
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Line 8, column 71, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thank
...rrow to hand over my house keys to you. thank you and God bless.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39887640449 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47543798305 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64606741573 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5224430359 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1818181818 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1818181818 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191574329099 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851717238948 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532151561777 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12607130322 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460449665587 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.