You are going away to travel for the summer.
A friend will be looking after your house while you are away. Write a letter to your friend.
Say where you are going
Describe your house
Explain some of the things your friend must do to look after your house\
Dear Ben,
Hope you are in the pink of your health. I was so excited to hear that you are coming to my place for your summer vacations but I am sorry to inform that I will not be able to attend you at my home. Otherwise, you would have enjoyed my hospitality.
To elucidate, I have to close the deal on which I was working from past six months and I cannot let it go. We are going to announce a joint venture with a big multinational company. I have taken care of all the necessary things that you will need during the stay. In case, if you require anything do let me know, I will arrange it or there is a market nearby from where you will get everything.
My house is very small with a kitchen on the right of the entrance and living on the left. my bedroom is upstairs just in front of the staircase and next to it is a guest room that you can use. The only thing I would like you to do is to put the dustbins out on every night and they are collected every morning. Also, if you could water the plants every second day in the evening would be a great help.
I will give you a call before I leave for the trip and will try to come back soon.
Cheers
Dennis
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- You are going away to travel for the summer.A friend will be looking after your house while you are away. Write a letter to your friend.Say where you are goingDescribe your houseExplain some of the things your friend must do to look after your house\ 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 91, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...of the entrance and living on the left. my bedroom is upstairs just in front of th...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 3.97021276596 4.54256449028 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13294662256 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587234042553 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6704176906 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.75 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08333333333 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26933208841 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859519981444 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662430716919 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153597330528 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651729655895 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.75 8.71597938144 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.99 7.59969072165 79% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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