You are going on holiday and you would like to hire a car.One of your parties is in a wheelchair.Write a letter to a car hire company.In your letter: explain the reason you need the car describe the type of car you need ask what the price is and what it includes
Hi Sir or Madam,
I am a citizen of London and live on Nofel Lushato Street.I am writing a letter of application for your institution.
I am your permanent customer and now I decided to go with some of my friends for the winter holidays.I would like to rent a car that is available from January 12 to January 6 and is technically sound because we are traveling through places that may not have a repairman.And we also have a lot of equipment for this long trip, including a wheelchair owned by one of my fellow travelers.
I need a roomy car so we can put this wheelchair in there, and we can sleep in it if we get cold.We cross deserts, mountains, and seas on our journey, and we want a car withGPS capabilities enabled.I want to know about the price range of these car models and to know if your car has the capabilities we want.If you have a car with the required conditions please confirm it so we can book it and make a prepayment.
In anticipation to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Daniali
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e of my friends for the winter holidays.I would like to rent a car that is availa...
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...f your car has the capabilities we want.If you have a car with the required condit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51595744681 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80501777482 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61170212766 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 16.3608247423 226% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 165.897076526 44.8134815571 370% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 169.8 76.5299724578 222% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 37.6 16.8248392259 223% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.4 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243137991108 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11225686862 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532456719496 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122065268345 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549976635717 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 8.37731958763 223% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 7.45979381443 206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.53 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 8.54432989691 197% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 8.15463917526 233% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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