You are going to move out of your apartment in an English-speaking country. Your landlord is a very good person who has assisted you a lot during your stay. Meanwhile, your friend would like to rent the apartment after you write a letter to your landlord in your letter.
Let your landlord know that you will be leaving.
Thank you landlord, for his or her help
Tell him or her about your friend.
Dear Smith
I am writing this letter to inform you about my colleague who is showing her willingness to rent the apartment after my migration to an English-speaking country United states of America.
As I already told you that I got admission to Thompson Rivers University in Kamloops, Canada for continuing my higher education to be a professional teacher. Therefore, I am leaving my residing apartment rented out by you on midnight of 27th March.
I really appreciate the kind help provided by you while my stay at your flat. Furthermore, I cannot forget your precious efforts taken to improve my French language and become fluent. So that I cannot feel any difficulty understanding people who speak French and do not know English.
To be honest, my friend Radhika who is 28-year-old is quite similar to me prefers to live in the same apartment where I am living now. She is very sincere to maintain cleanliness and deposit the rent timely. Moreover, she is a very quiet girl and does not cause any inconvenience to you.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 284, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, really, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90860215054 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92481518697 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688172043011 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0459490815 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321637098373 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113252684276 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639550215099 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142919950944 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497328367262 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.